Cool, much better. It really shows your work around the pedals. The third pic is harder to tell as it's almost to dark. It probably wouldn't have hurt to have a little ambient light in that one so we could get a bearing where we are looking (would allow familiar object shapes in the shadows).
I do photography as a hobby (webstite here:
http://www.pbase.com/panzer948), but from my experience, low light photography can be some of the most difficult.